As our blogs come to an end I would like to talk about what I have learned in the English classes that I have taken with Stephanie. I can’t even count how many times I had to revise my papers through out the year. Although those revision processes have indeed helped me grow as a writer. That is because I used to have my whole paper completely marked up by Stephanie and now when I showed her my last paper she barely marked it up the mark ups were just minor things. I do have to say that my writing now compared to my writing from senior has greatly increased as well. Last year I would hand a paper in and it would take me about 2-3 weeks to get it completely revised. Now it only takes me about 3 days and just a little bit of help instead of a ton of help and a ton of time. Next, I would like to talk about how when we started these blogs I would absolutely hate doing them. But, we have done so many from both semesters I was able to discover that I can think outside of the box. What I mean by that I was able to think about my self as a writer and was able to talk about out of the regular topics towards the end of the 2nd semester. For example my whole blog on how college advisors and how they really don’t help students out at all. So with all that said I think it is safe to say I will do just fine when I have to have to write papers at ISU.
Wednesday, April 28, 2010
Tuesday, April 20, 2010
ACT
Today I am going to talk about how I think that one’s ACT score should not determine how well they will or will not do in college. This is so stupid why should ones score of a test, have such a big influence on where they can go. I say this because without a decent ACT score you do not have very good selection on where you can attend college at the university level. Say, if someone is a horrible test taker and gets good grades throughout high school but can get into the college of his or her dreams because he or she got, say a 17 on the ACT. How is this fair at all? They have worked their butts off for the past 3 years to get those grades and all their dreams are shot down basically because they didn’t do well on that one test. I remember when I took the ACT some of the stuff that was on the thing, I had not even learned yet. This really bothered me because if I would of learned it I would have got a better score, which potentially have got me into a better school. So couldn’t it be the high schools fault for not keeping up with the material that may have potential to be on the ACT? I just think that it is really dumb how much colleges look at one’s ACT score, it should be a number of things that play into ones admission to the college. To sum it all up, I think there should be a better way of getting into the college of your dreams.
Tuesday, April 13, 2010
The Troubles
Today I’m going to talk about what troubles me the most in writing now days. One thing that I have noticed this semester about my writing is that every topic I choose I can hardly find any research on. I don’t know what it is, like I want to choose topics that interest me but are not over used one’s, you know what I mean? I guess I must be looking them up wrong or something. So that is one thing that grinds my gears, the next thing is trying to get through the endorsement groups. It has been difficult I most say, our class is pretty good at them and they have helped me fix a lot of my mistakes. Although, sometimes I feel as if they are too strict I mean I know they have to be. But I just feel sometimes that it is a little much. Any who that would be the second item, the next thing that really gets me, is that for some reason I cannot get the concept down of rhetorical prĂ©cis. I mean I know how to do it but for some reason I cannot get the right wording in there. So to sum up this whole semester I feel as if I have learned a lot about wording and making good sentences because that is one of my biggest issues. Last semester what really got me was my sensory detail, which I think I got down so hopefully the remaining of this semester I will be able to get down this whole wording situation.
Tuesday, April 6, 2010
All right today I am going to talk about hunting. So, if you don’t like hunting you will not show that much interest in this post. Everyone knows that the state of Illinois is broke and the government is trying to do what ever it can to get money. Now, one way they are doing this is by raising the prices on all outdoor activities. Let me explain, to hunt, fish, and trap you must have a permit or license to do so. Now, if the prices of those go up not many people are going to want to get them. My boy Devin said that his deer permits cost him and his dad an extra 50 dollars for everything they needed. You may think so what people wont get them no big deal, if the prices go up. But, if you look at what will happen when people don’t buy them and don’t go hunting or fishing it could be a huge deal. The reason for this is because the reason we have hunting and hunting seasons the way they are is so that we are able to keep the animal population under control and to keep diseases under control. If the deer and animal population get to big that is when diseases start to form and spread. In time this will all come back in hurt the people because it will get them sick. Anyways not many people seem to think of it this way so it might be a crazy concept to think about if the prices of permits and license start to increase.